First created topic, and I've got to say- bravo to the writer and artist.
Really enjoyed that backstory, character development, etc. One story was even first-person; clever.
Wanted to give a heads up on some typos you might want to fix (I've done a lot of proofing over the years):
Ch1
sunsets just (as) Mother
herd sleeps(,) as
Ch5
will never eat (clover)
completely (terrifying) world.
Pom, that was dumb! (no 'as' or word after)
Ch6
has (a) short snout
and we (must) choose which
Hope that helps. Glad to help support Mane6 & the game community a bit. Let me know if you ever need more proofing or even art help.
Really enjoyed that backstory, character development, etc. One story was even first-person; clever.
Wanted to give a heads up on some typos you might want to fix (I've done a lot of proofing over the years):
Ch1
sunsets just (as) Mother
herd sleeps(,) as
Ch5
will never eat (clover)
completely (terrifying) world.
Pom, that was dumb! (no 'as' or word after)
Ch6
has (a) short snout
and we (must) choose which
Hope that helps. Glad to help support Mane6 & the game community a bit. Let me know if you ever need more proofing or even art help.